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Can one woman save a country? TWICE?
Can she do it as a lady musketeer and fencer in 17th-century France, AND can she and the musketeers grant a hero's final wish?


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Article 5. Creative Fiction Writing Workshop: Creating Your World for Your Story.

When writing a novel, the author must craft a convincing, interesting story and create endearing or even dislikeable characters. However, creating a credible world backdrop for the characters and the story is just as crucial for writing a first-rate novel. Details are more important than one might think!


Pay attention to these three things to create a credible world, and your readers will return to visit again and again.


1) The world you craft must be believable. That means if you are writing historical fiction set in seventeenth century France, the historical details of the time period must be accurate and consistent. The author will need to research such details as significant historical events or personages, prevailing cultural attitudes and ideas, the political atmosphere and events, types of food eaten, types of clothes worn, manners of speech, and the list continues.


“Fast-paced music echoed through the hall. Violins, cellos, violas and a plethora of other stringed instruments. Heads turned as a new couple entered the festivities. He was tall, well-toned, and darkly handsome. His partner was a tall, blond beauty sporting a light blue dress with a somewhat fashionable décolleté. It set off her skin tone and breathtaking figure perfectly, despite its relative simplicity. There were whispers about the pair as they joined the reel. Obviously nobles, but strangers still.”


The above passage from For Honor by Kat Jaske is the result of extensive research. What kind of music instruments did they play? What color and style of dress would a noble woman wear? What type of dances would they engage in?


“Finally she dropped in through the window of the second story, and snatched the gun from her mouth, panting for breath. Her hands were still shaking as she re-primed the gun and searched for the servants’ entrance to Athos’ room, hoping that he would not have thought to lock it. She had a bad feeling about this. Really bad.


As she opened the servants’ entrance she heard the tell-tale spanning of a wheel lock, and she propelled herself headlong into the chamber, yelling, “Athos,” at the top of her lungs.”


The above descriptions of a gun are just enough to be interesting and accurate. You must be sure your characters use a gun that would have existed in the time period; else, it will stick out like a sour note to the savvy reader who loves this genre of fiction.


2) Pay attention to the amount of detail in your descriptions. Use details judiciously to enhance the reader’s experience of the story and to help him/her imagine the world in which he/she will be traveling. This means striking a delicate balance between too little description of the world and too much description. Either extreme is likely to alienate your reader.

Remember, readers love the historical tidbits that enhance the story, but when it turns into a tedious chore to keep everything straight, they may close your book forever.

The way to learn proper balance is to do a lot a reading and see what other good fiction writers have done and also practice creating a lot of worlds. Then, get feedback from readers about what you have written.


3) Add in the elements that are fictional--those that come out of the author’s own imagination-- in a way that these elements do not seem to clash with the established atmosphere for the story. Fictional aspects should mesh harmoniously with the realistic aspects of the story. There are times an author can take greater liberty with established facts, but a wise author, especially of historical fiction, will acknowledge that he or she has taken some liberties.


For a fantasy world, there will be more fiction involved and much more detail must be devoted to establishing the rules of the world, the races, the technology, the geography, the history of that world, etc. Be careful though. Characters should still follow “rules of human behavior” or no reader will wish to continue reading.


Remember, to have an outstanding story the world must support the cast and the storyline and not detract from either. So detail, detail, detail--within reason.

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Article 6. Creative Fiction Writing Workshop: Creating Your World for Your Historical Fiction Story


So you want to write an exceptional historical fiction novel? Of course, you will need to dedicate a significant amount of time to the process of crafting the story and developing both endearing and dislikeable characters. But that’s not enough.


Even if you create a magnificent story and memorable characters, a poorly created world will ruin the entire reading experience. For a truly first-rate story, the historical fiction writer must devote a tremendous amount of effort to creating a totally credible world for the characters and the story. Too many or too few details will make or break the story.


You must pay particular attention to the following things:


1) Make your historical world accurate so that readers feel they have been transported back in time to the era of the story. This means that you as an author of historical fiction have your work cut out for you. You are going to have to do research on the time period, the country or countries, and the city or cities where your novel is set.


And you will need to do far more research than you think. In fact, you will have to become an expert on your chosen time. Specifically, you will have to know the major and sometimes minor historical and political events of the country and the countries surrounding it.

 

You will have to research a few hundred years into the past to get a feel for how the attitudes of the culture or the cultural practices were shaped.


And still your work is not done. Seemingly inconsequential details about types of language used, types of clothes worn depending on social status, types of food eaten, methods of transportation, weapons most frequently used and styles of music of the time cannot be left unattended.


2) Use the details you have gleaned from your research judiciously. Just because you have all the detail doesn’t mean you will write it all. The goal is to enhance the reader’s experience of the story and to help him/her imagine the world in which he/she will be traveling, not to teach a history course. Strike a delicate balance between too little description of the world and too much description because either extreme will alienate your reader.


Avoid using too many esoteric words from the time period that your readers may not understand. If you drown them in your knowledge, they will just put aside your book and go on to something more interesting. Instead, give them just a delightful flavor of the time period.

Unfortunately this means that you will never put to paper the vast majority of what you researched, but your expertise in manipulating the world will definitely show through and entice your readers back for more.


In order to strike this delicate balance you must practice. And then practice some more. Start writing small segments and then expand. Get feedback from those you trust to give an honest opinion. Get feedback from several sources. Then use that feedback to modify and improve your work.


3) Finally, add in purely fictional elements––things that come out of the authorial imagination. Be careful that you add them in a way that they do not clash with the world or with the characters you have labored to create. Fictional aspects should mesh harmoniously with the realistic aspects of the story.

There are times an author can take greater liberty with established facts, but a wise author, will acknowledge that he or she has taken some liberties. Read other good historical fiction to get ideas on how to accomplish this blending.


Remember, in an interesting and successful story the world must support the cast and the storyline and not detract from either. So detail, detail, detail—but not too much or too little. It must be just right. Kat Jaske www.forhonor.com ©2006 All rights reserved.

Kat Jaske is an English and French teacher in Las Vegas, where her high school selected For Honor as the featured book for the 2006 Reading Incentive Program.

Can one woman save a country? Can she do it as a lady musketeer and fencer in 17th-century France, and can she and the musketeers grant a hero’s final wish? This historical fiction novel is a great example of how to write it right. See the author web site http://www.forhonor.com for more information.

 

Author Kat Jaske is a sport fencer. Her books feature musketeers, fencing and sword fighting, along with a wonderful human-interest story.

Righting Time
Book Three of BY HONOR BOUND
by Kat Jaske
What if Jala really is from the future and the fate of her future does depend on convincing Laurel and the 17th-century musketeers of that truth? Read Excerpts